First plot detail change!
I've finally finished the actual sparring match in the Halves of a Coin story. I'm going to have to wrap up the scene with some advice from the teachrs and whatnot, but that shouldn't take too long. The actual fighting is over. Is that kinda a relief to you too? It's not the best scene, but I need to sort of introduce certain aspects of Lumi's character
I've made the first change that impacts the story. In the Halves of a Coin, I originally said Lumi was the only child growing up in Harmony. This is no longer quite true. There is a girl named Lucia who is also growing up there, sort of with Lumi. She hasn't been their her whole life like Lumi, but pretty darn close so it's essentially the same. I'll talk more about Lucia later. When she actually shows up in the story.
So, I added a tiny bit more to the Spirit From the Sands story. Not much interesting. Back to set-up again. I'm going to try to keep Spirit From the Sands (part one of Master Thief) short. Or at least, relatively short. Compared to what I'm planning for parts 2 and 3, which I don't have a name for yet.
Actually, I've worked more on the story than I can put on the website. See, I sometimes get inspiration to write parts that don't go chronologically where I can include them. For example, I've already written the closing scene to part 2. Well, I think it will be part 2. If it gets too long it will be the end of part 3. But that's besides the point. I can't exactly put up bits like that yet until I write up to the point where they happen, and actually make them make sense to anyone other than me.
